hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,166 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Care Less - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I care now less
And tell him on the face
About my decision
'There can be no more relation'

He has been unreasonable
Almost unbearable with lots problems
Daily beating with no reason
He has turned now insane person

Children are growing
I give in silently and allowing
But now it is almost beyond limit
I want him to know how I shall greet.

I am serving woman
Take care for him and children
It is the only reason I tolerate
Keep silent and never state

He has entered home
With no more happiness to welcome
He is not in his usual sense
His entry makes me tense

'you whore I shall push you out'
I heard him whispering about
He was falling on ground and rising
His next act was not at all surprising


Comments about I Care Less by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 35,166 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 10:21:00 PM)

    nice


    Ruth Courtney2 minutes ago
    I like these kind of poems
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Gold Star - 35,166 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 10:20:00 PM)

    abuse is an unforgivable act, even if you have children that depend on you


    Clarisa Cruz2 minutes ago
    you shouldn't tolerate such a mindless act of violence, especially if he is your supposed loved one
    Comment +1
    I (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,166 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 10:20:00 PM)

    It's quite nice.


    John Titor1 minute ago
    The subject material is nice, good choice of words but could use more subtlety (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,166 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 10:05:00 PM)

    I care now less
    And tell him on the face (Report) Reply

Read all 4 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, July 25, 2014


[Hata Bildir]