I Could Be All Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

I Could Be All

Rating: 4.9


Even as tiny dropp of water-
i could be all
i could show you my god
the sun, the moon and you too
i could show you in me-and
you become my god
even as a tiny dropp of water- i could be all
till my mom(sun) picks me up to nurture my soul

In a natural blend of a stream
we could sing his song
In a natural blend of a sea
we could dance to his tunes
In a natural blend of a rain
we could caress his world

EVEN IF NOT FOR ALL THESE-
even as a tiny drop
of water - i could be all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 17 December 2008

lovely! ! ! ! ! a nice reminder that its the drops that make up the ocean thought provoking one --10 anjali

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 December 2008

very meaningful! ....from a tiny drops of water comes the vast ocean... ... even as tiny drops of water...makes us whole ...from a tiny drops of water, life flourished...10++++ _maia_

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Bob Blackwell 21 December 2008

You found the truth in one tiny dropp of water, lovely poem so true.

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Antonio Liao 22 December 2008

your poem have made my day complete....its everything what i wish in life....a feeling trust has birth the eternity i do promise to my wife...thank you...God bless

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absolutely great... Good work KRista

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Catrina Heart 25 January 2009

You could be all in all the way you can...positive outlook, great composition...10

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Rani Turton 23 January 2009

The cosmic unity is wonderfully portrayed in these lines.

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Ania R. 03 January 2009

Your poem is beautifully positive. I really like it.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 December 2008

This kind of positive feelings will surely help a healthy growth

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Sarah Sisson 27 December 2008

this is deep! what a 10!

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