I Do Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

I Do

Rating: 5.0


Who wants a love like this?
One that one can't resist.
Who wants a love like this...
One that can't be categorized,
Or dismissed just that quick!

Who wants a love like this?
One that one can't resist.
One that can't be categorized,
Or dismissed just that quick!

I'm fascinated...
By what this could be.
Hold I do close.
I'm so elated...
No imitation.
It is not faded.
It kinda says,
Don't let this go
To my head!

I feel no need...
To feel demanding or greedy.
I am ecstatic,
That this has come to me!

Who wants a love like this?
One that one can't resist.
One that can't be categorized,
Or dismissed just that quick!

Who? I do.

I'm fascinated...
By what this could be.
Hold I do close.
I'm so elated...
No imitation.
It is not faded.
It kinda says,
Don't let this go
To my head!

I feel no need...
To feel demanding or greedy.
I am ecstatic,
That this has come to me!
Who wants a love like this?
Easy in the giving...
Long lasting to please.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emancipation Planz 28 September 2007

Saturated dizzyness in the bestest way to soak up long lasting luving! ! ! Well done long may you feel this way..

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