I Don'T Like This Poem Poem by Isaac Maliya

Isaac Maliya

Isaac Maliya

The People's Country! Where People Laugh From Their Hearts!

I Don'T Like This Poem

Rating: 3.3


This poem unveils me
Dissecting my whole
Cutting assunder my hopes
I don't like this poem

This poem lays me bare
Exposing my true nakedness
Weaknesses, failings, stumbles
I don't like this poem

This poem writes my story
Taking me where I began
Showing my life's mediocre stages
Gazing at all my actions
I don't like this poem!

Wednesday,22nd April,2009
Huyton, Liverpool, UK

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 17 July 2009

the one of your composition you in doubt with, thats the one is the best to the eyes of the reader...10

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even if u didn't like it i did! ! ! it was beautiful and heartfelt. great poem!

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Wojja Fink 23 April 2009

they're often the best ones...dicovering what's hidden....

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