Isaac Maliya

Rookie - 105 Points (4th December / The People's Country! Where People Laugh From Their Hearts!)

I Don'T Like This Poem - Poem by Isaac Maliya

This poem unveils me
Dissecting my whole
Cutting assunder my hopes
I don't like this poem

This poem lays me bare
Exposing my true nakedness
Weaknesses, failings, stumbles
I don't like this poem

This poem writes my story
Taking me where I began
Showing my life's mediocre stages
Gazing at all my actions
I don't like this poem!

Wednesday,22nd April,2009
Huyton, Liverpool, UK

Comments about I Don'T Like This Poem by Isaac Maliya

  • Freshman - 826 Points Ency Bearis (7/17/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    the one of your composition you in doubt with, thats the one is the best to the eyes of the reader...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie ~Heart of Ice~ ¢♦ ¢♦ ¢ (7/14/2009 4:11:00 PM)

    even if u didn't like it i did! ! ! it was beautiful and heartfelt.
    great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Wojja Fink (4/23/2009 12:23:00 PM)

    they're often the best ones...dicovering what's hidden.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 23, 2009

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