Sue Stone

Rookie - 7 Points (16th November 1965 / West Germany)

I Don'T Want To Talk About 'It'! - Poem by Sue Stone

No thanks.

I don’t want to talk about ‘it’.
‘It’? F*cking ‘it’?

That
tiny,
snivelling
insignificant
mono
syllab ic simile
for something that’s bigger
than a f*cking aircraft hanger?

Your puerile insensitivity

Let me leave you with that thought.

Hanging in the air,
For you to store in your
F*cking aircraft hanger


Comments about I Don'T Want To Talk About 'It'! by Sue Stone

  • Rookie - 249 Points Diana Van Den Berg (6/15/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    Oooh! I can imangine the catharsis, Sue, that the climax of your poem brought in, 'Your puerile insensitivity'! Well done! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,701 Points Is It Poetry (6/5/2009 3:38:00 PM)

    it is your meaning perhaps it is lost to it...is it clear..it is dear..what a wonderful stanza of planes and where it hides them...it thinks you haves more of it in you...iip...do it again..it is great..thank you..iip (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 5, 2009



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