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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I feel great


I feel great when see the sunshine
Everything around makes me feel so fine
I sit quietly on table and happily dine
I inwardly thank all as if they are all mine

One must feel contended with whatever available
It moulds you to the situation and makes determined and capable
No situation can force you to flee from the scene
As this is only weakness generally seen

With all the blessings from the almighty
I still feel unsafe and feel pity
Some of the feelings make me uneasy
Even though I try to keep self very busy

It has nothing to do with my fate
I can fearlessly stand alone and state
Yet I know how uncertain the life is!
Everything to gain but lot more to miss

What is worrying me all the times?
Is it the accumulation of wealth sometimes?
Fall in health occasionally or any time
I don’t contribute it wholly or prime

It bothered me much about next adventure
It is not related to smooth travel in future
It has something to do with life time efforts
To live with harmony and good rapports

These all helped me to think positively
I had driven in this direction successively
I was not very much attached or possessive
But it definitely forced me to be obsessive

When it becomes apparent that you are living world
You feel some fear and develop the cold
It is natural phenomena taking place with everyone
Only people with stubborn mind care for none

It is greatest asset that you have it before hand
You know very well that nothing accompanies you till the end
It is running after illusory things with no purpose
One may suppose always but can’t easily dispose

Submitted: Sunday, June 12, 2011
Edited: Monday, June 13, 2011

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/12/2011 8:43:00 PM)

    It is greatest asset that you have it before hand
    You know very well that nothing accompanies you till the end
    It is running after illusory things with no purpose
    One may suppose always but can’t easily dispose (Report) Reply

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