Shalom Freedman

Freshman - 1,537 Points (Troy New York)

I Had A Poem/But It Was Not Perfect


I HAD A POEM/ BUT IT WAS NOT PERFECT

I had a poem
But it was not perfect
I corrected it
And lost it
I corrected it again
And lost it again
I lost it and lost it
And corrected it and corrected it.

Finally it was a poem sort of
But not the poem I began with
And not the poem I wanted
And not the poem I loved
It was a poem
Which made the best of what was
When it knew
At its beginning
There was something better.

Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2009

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