I Hear Your Whisper Poem by katie james
I Hear Your Whisper
I hear your whisper in the wind,
Blowing past like there is no troubles.
I hear your whisper in my mind,
It haunts me all night.
I hear your whisper all around me,
People say the words for you.
I hear you whisper.....,
And i hold you close
I hear your whisper and i scream,
I MISS YOU! !
I took special note of the line 'I hear you whisper and I hold you close'. Both before and after that I was sure you were not speaking of a living physical something you could actually hold close. So that part is not consistent as far as a reader is concerned. That's why I gave it a 7. GW62
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4/26/2024 6:35:51 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Whispering and vanishing! May be you tried to hold him too close...could have let him whisper and remained silent hearing! A good write on disturbing romantic feels...10