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saadat tahir

Rookie - 386 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

I know that I love you…2409

I know that I love you, my dear, yes!
Oh you name! …Lord thee bless!

works with the infirm, comes home late,
A role she plays, ordained by fate.
Study the tomes, all night long.
So can cut through, many a thong.
Pops a pill, to sack it late,
across the bed, a pile of hate.

Few snatched moments, on the line.
Scarcely if ever; a quaff of wine.
Long now forgotten, is out to dine,
weekends trudge, stringing laundry line.
Oh! Loved the firs and rustling pines
Cutting through wrists are daunting twines

I know that I love you, my dear, yes!
Oh you name! …Lord thee bless!

In a far off land only a name resides.
Hardly if ever the time coincides.
But a hope is kindled and kept alive.
A direction and path along which to strive.
Mops up home that's really not hers.
Nor was she ever gifted any furs.

A sweet simple girl, inside resides.
Needs an arm to hold and hide.
Who'll softly touch in a caring squeeze.
Who'll walk her along on the beech.
Look deep in her eyes and say not a bit.
Make her smile by his beam and wit.

I know that I love you, my dear, yes!
Oh you name! …Lord thee bless!

(Sept 24,2009)

Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2009
Edited: Thursday, August 30, 2012

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  • Freshman - 2,327 Points Points Of View (11/22/2014 9:31:00 AM)

    Two thumbs up!
    Now I know why my poem She is a woman caught your attention..
    Because you love and respect women. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 907 Points Ken E Hall (9/22/2014 5:10:00 PM)

    Written here love is a many splendid thing wrote from the heart indeed, , , regards (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,565 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/6/2014 7:18:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem with many captivating lines adds beauty of love, make it heart warming poem. I liked reading all the lines...
    A sweet simple girl, inside resides.
    Needs an arm to hold and hide....loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kseniya (Xeny) Rundel (4/24/2011 10:11:00 AM)

    A very positive poem with good energy. It impressed me so that I translated for you our famous poet Sergey Esenin ... I Hope I have succeeded (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Rafique Farooqi (2/15/2010 8:42:00 AM)

    a beautiful wish and desire, penned down skillfully with great flow of simplicity, ......10++++ for S (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (10/7/2009 4:01:00 AM)

    Hey.. that's what I am talking about Sadaat..
    This poem rocks big time..! ! !
    I mean a lovely poem, ... I was kinda surprised when I saw the title, I mean you don't usually write these types of poems.. But this is very good, This poem shows your versatility as a writer. Nice to read.. Enjoyed this one very much..10++

    Shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M A (9/29/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    What a simple and loving poem. Good for S, and good for you. Love exists. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ridah Ellahi (9/28/2009 12:15:00 PM)

    beautiful..a poetic masterpiece finely penned :)
    im glad u like my poetry
    and thanks for ur comments :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Orphic - (9/26/2009 5:34:00 AM)

    Man! You do wonders with the rimes.

    I know that I love you, my dear S!
    Oh you name! …Lord thee bless!

    Such a lovely piece.
    God Bless 'S' =) (Report) Reply

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