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jahanvi .......................


i'l fly


The wings to fly with the words to describe
i'l fly
knowing that someday u'll shot me down
with your arrow of poison
but, i'l fly
in the horizon
wandering again and again on your roof
making sure you know that
there is no place where u can cage me
because, i'l fly
i'l experience the light
i'll take the rain
and never you think that i'm alone
for i have the horizon in which i fly
you can never lure me
for i know all your baits
and every time u'll try
i'l fly

Submitted: Saturday, June 04, 2011

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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (6/4/2011 9:08:00 AM)

    I loved the way you wrote the poem. The poem is extremely rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rated it 10.
    TFS.
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. (Report) Reply

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