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Aastha Uppal

(7th march 1990)

! ! ! ! i'll never be loved! ! ! !


Not ready to accept till now
Always had an inner row
Someone somewhere i'll find
Love between us will help us bind.

i know not how long i have waited
i think love is extravagently rated
it's high time i admit yes i fear
i'll never be loved, it's now clear.

Denied, rejected, crushed by all
Like the rotten leaves of the fall
They blame me for all they can
Being a human is the worst, what a clan.

Someone to scold, someone to hold
A loving hand always there to mould
You know not how lucky you are
Someone is always there for you even when you are far.

Being loved is a bliss
Someone to love is all i miss
it's high time i admit yes i fear
i'll never be loved it's now clear.

Now rotting in an ORPHAN'S GRAVE
All i'll say, for love i crave
Now there's nothing to fear
because now it's clear
i have never been loved and
i'll never be loved it's now clear.


DEDICATED TO ALL THE ORPHANS! ! ! ! !

-aAstha

Submitted: Sunday, January 17, 2010
Edited: Sunday, January 17, 2010

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  • Seule Coeur (2/27/2012 5:33:00 AM)

    Real touching words and those has been through this dark tunnel of life can have this abstract touch of thy poetry.. I really appreciate it. (Report) Reply

  • Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (2/20/2012 11:00:00 AM)

    Absolutely beautiful with an amazing twist in the end :) ...nice tribute to all the Orphans.. I'll never be loved i'm much familiar to this sentence..but not in an orphan way. Good one! ! (Report) Reply

  • Lucky Gautam (1/30/2012 8:09:00 PM)

    very nice... simply mind blowing... ur thoughts ur views n the way u expressd them (Report) Reply

  • Aranthabailu Ummar (10/5/2011 11:21:00 AM)

    now love is redefined. The pure love what we learnt from our fore fathers is no more exist. Now it is selfish too
    What you read from your heart is good but expecting the same is not good (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/25/2011 6:06:00 PM)

    The way u expressed the situation of mind is awesome and for love-please do not wait for it..let it wait for u...is better coz we live a transitory and temporary life..u do not know even which time u leave this world though people are advised not to be mortal everytime and nurture a positive attitude..harbour the days as it comes coz nothing is more important than ur life and that u r living beyond earthly possessions striking a loom that though will not fetch u something in the long run rather than fighting ur mind snatching the patience away which u will feel later on u could have given to those abstract books, other sides of life which cannot but speaks in silence to be urs at the first place forever provided u r committed strongly...Well co/ordnitaed art as poetic expressions here. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (7/26/2010 12:42:00 PM)

    Now rotting in an ORPHAN'S GRAVE
    All i'll say, for love i crave
    Now there's nothing to fear
    because now it's clear
    i have never been loved and
    i'll never be loved it's now clear.


    but u wrote above. 'being loved is a bliss'.... you are going to be loved. begin to l ove whole heartedly and you will be loved. smile and you will get thousand smiles in return.. my prayers are for you. do not lose hope. thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • R. H. Peat (7/24/2010 2:14:00 PM)

    As Rumi says:
    To have the experience of love; you have to be willing to be vulnerable. Protect or guard yourself against love, and you can't have the feelings of love at all. For love gives all and asks for nothing in return. It is always willing to be hurt but never willjng to be abusive.

    a poet friend
    RH Peat (Report) Reply

  • Afzal Shauq (5/3/2010 2:29:00 AM)

    Being loved is a bliss
    Someone to love is all i miss
    it's high time i admit yes i fear
    i'll never be loved it's now clear.


    what a sweet and meaningful stanza is this one..great task (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/19/2010 6:02:00 PM)

    this world is big and bad but there are men with hearts still...........and i wish someone will come for your appreciation someday someplace--then it is gonna be golden moments for you ----and every woman remembers that as glimpse when they become old and counting days with wrinkles on face and pole on hand------God bless.Shalom.Aamit Rothschild(Amit Ray) . (Report) Reply

  • Riyaz Gupta (1/21/2010 8:44:00 AM)

    i know not how long i have waited
    i think love is extravagantly rated

    Aastha, You write so well! 10++ for your thought process.... (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (1/18/2010 1:52:00 PM)

    nice simile

    Denied, rejected, crushed by all
    Like the rotten leaves of the fall

    nice sad lyric poem

    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Vaishakseetharam Dattani (1/17/2010 8:40:00 AM)

    Aastha very nice poem which touches aeven the toughest heart..Someone, Somewhere will be there for you, U r never alone! ! ! God Bless You (Report) Reply

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