Yasser Koor


I Lose My Girl - Poem by Yasser Koor

Alone …Alone …Alone
It’s so hard to be alone
With whole my family
With whole my friends
However I think I’m here alone.

Sad …Sad …Sad...
I lost a beautiful thing I had
I told my mum I told my dad
That I feel good I don’t feel bad
Should I feeling happy or feeling sad
I don’t know I don’t understand

Light …Light …light …
Dark is here where is the light
I can’t see I can’t think I can’t write
And for my happiness I’ll fight
To know what the difference
Between the wrong and the right

Feel …Feel …Feel …
Love is not easy thing to feel
She hurts my heart, I try to heal
She leaves me with the pain
She leaves me with the tears.


Comments about I Lose My Girl by Yasser Koor

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (5/30/2009 1:18:00 AM)

    well expressed feelings deeply and touchingly said (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
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  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/8/2009 12:34:00 AM)

    deep feelings and deeper emotions blended all through lovely to ponder on (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (3/8/2009 8:11:00 PM)

    sings well.. I love it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Blue Eyes (11/18/2008 6:31:00 PM)

    the repitition of alone emphasizes on the meaning.i think its a great poem that has many great aspects. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points &&angel4ever && (10/14/2008 5:55:00 AM)

    This your third poem talking about your lost love or your love that ends you are badly injured GUY iam sure you have a real story to tell i hope you find your girl never lose her again (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (10/10/2008 12:27:00 AM)

    aweeee hugs to you............nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (10/5/2008 10:03:00 PM)

    yasser-awh so sad and alone
    dont worry she'll be back
    lovely write
    lots of rhyming and alliteration
    a ++++++++10 you deserve
    regards anjalie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Little Hatila ;) (10/1/2008 6:30:00 PM)

    'love is not an easy thing to feel' was the greatest part of this lovely poem...it is really a nice poem....keep going (Report) Reply

  • Rookie samar Halabi (9/9/2008 7:58:00 PM)

    mmm I don't know why but I really liked it it is really wonderful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (9/7/2008 1:55:00 PM)

    'She leaves me with the pain
    She leaves me with the tears.' A painful composition of love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (9/1/2008 7:43:00 PM)

    I can't recommend this one. When I first saw it, I thought I would, but the words don't complement the structure of the poem. That really makes it worse not better.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 27, 2008



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