Alone …Alone …Alone
It’s so hard to be alone
With whole my family
With whole my friends
However I think I’m here alone.
Sad …Sad …Sad...
I lost a beautiful thing I had
I told my mum I told my dad
That I feel good I don’t feel bad
Should I feeling happy or feeling sad
I don’t know I don’t understand
Light …Light …light …
Dark is here where is the light
I can’t see I can’t think I can’t write
And for my happiness I’ll fight
To know what the difference
Between the wrong and the right
Feel …Feel …Feel …
Love is not easy thing to feel
She hurts my heart, I try to heal
She leaves me with the pain
She leaves me with the tears.
'She leaves me with the pain She leaves me with the tears.' A painful composition of love.
mmm I don't know why but I really liked it it is really wonderful poem
'love is not an easy thing to feel' was the greatest part of this lovely poem...it is really a nice poem....keep going
yasser-awh so sad and alone dont worry she'll be back lovely write lots of rhyming and alliteration a ++++++++10 you deserve regards anjalie
well expressed feelings deeply and touchingly said
the repitition of alone emphasizes on the meaning.i think its a great poem that has many great aspects.
This your third poem talking about your lost love or your love that ends you are badly injured GUY iam sure you have a real story to tell i hope you find your girl never lose her again
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I can't recommend this one. When I first saw it, I thought I would, but the words don't complement the structure of the poem. That really makes it worse not better. GW62