I Lost.... Poem by Micron

I Lost....

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I lost so much when you left that day
I still wished God had let you stay
You took away a huge part of me
I lost most of my light my spark inside
I miss my truthful loving guide
My heart is still torn and sore
And my soul still misses you more
I lost the strongest woman I ever knew
The gorgeous lady I looked up to
My courage was hit so very hard
I lost most of my will to try fight back
It took my determination to live and carry on
Dad lost his soul mate, his other half
I can't console him, replace his missing part
Life's not been the same its hard still to laugh,
Now there's two, dad and I, with no mum there's not three,
I Miss you mum, the glue that held together me.

Tuesday, October 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: missing you
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In memory of my mum, who I still miss every day and was my inspiration for life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Achill Lad 14 October 2014

A touching tribute to you mum. You must have loved and respected her very much. A beautiful poem.

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