I Lost Some1 Poem by Ashish Sharda

I Lost Some1

Rating: 5.0


it was written when my heart was broken for the very 1st time...
so here it goes.....


lost sum1 that i love......
i lost sum1 whom i care.....
i lost sum1 whom i dont want to share....
with any 1...

i lost sum1 that i love....
i lost sum1 whom i care...
i lost sum1 whom i dont want to share....
with any 1...

i loved her 4m my heart and she knows it...
i loved her 4m my soul and she knows it...
i loved her 4m the depth and she knows it...

then why..why does she do that...

now i am alone with no 1 around...
now i am thinking of the things...that was b/w us...
now she has made me think...of what had gone wrong....
she had made me think...of the reasons....that could be....

bcoz....
few days back...she was with me...
few days back...we were 1...
few days back...everything was all right....

but now its A new day...
with new start...
with new begining...
with new soul...
with new heart....
with new mind....


i will not be the same...that i know....
but i will try...that i know...
the time is right to start a fresh...that i know...
but howw....that i dont know.....

it will be difficult to 4get her....
but i have to.......that i know.....


now i think....could it be better.....
why cant i turn the time...get it all right...
bur its bluff that i know....

and all i want to say is....


i lost sum1 that i love.....
i lost sum1 4 whom i care....
i lost sum 1 whom i odour......
i lost sum1 whom i dont want to share....
with any 1.....
with any 1....
with any 1.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhilasha Bhatt 03 February 2016

Really a beautiful poem...loved it...but why did u stoped writing.....start writing your thoughts and emotions with experience in the form of poetry.....thank you for sharing :)

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 July 2009

Loosing someone in love is gaining alot.

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i lost sum1 that i love..... i lost sum1 4 whom i care.... i lost sum 1 whom i odour...... i lost sum1 whom i dont want to share.... with any 1..... with any 1.... with any 1....... nothing to be disheatened dear. love is not what we think in essence........try to bechoosey and this will come with passage of time....10

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Lakshmi Venkataraman 17 July 2009

wonderful 1! ! ! ! touching! ! ! ! .....

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