I Love You Poem by Fate McFate

I Love You

Rating: 5.0


The days you shed me from the sun
The nights you shed me from the moon

The moments you wiped my tears
The times my heart had bliss

The hours you guide my feet
The minutes you hugged be tight

Those seconds I'll always cherish
This memory I can't trash.

I will preach your undying love
I feel loved like a dove.

Sunday, August 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 October 2019

Beautiful and passionate piece of poetry nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Njuguna.

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Susan Williams 26 August 2018

The hours you guide my feet The minutes you hugged be tight- - - I particularly liked these lines!

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thank you.

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Naila Rais 26 August 2018

A nice write.... Thnx for sharing............ You may like to read my poems too...10+++++++++++++++++++ Naila

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thanks and am you now

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