fate mcfate

Rookie - 13 Points (03/12/1991 / eldoret)

Dear She, - Poem by fate mcfate

Can't tell the sun
not to rise.

I'll let darkness rein
if only i could manage.

This is one moment
no one let's go.

To stay by your side
not to see you go away.

Why should man be greedy
to desire more than you?

Here with me
is all I prayed for.

Maybe am lost
just within my orchard.

It's fun though;
everywhere is home and warm.

Your arms are securing,
your words are comforting.

Am caged in your love
with a fire pillar around me.


Comments about Dear She, by fate mcfate

  • Rookie - 13 Points Njuguna Peter Mnyagia (8/23/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Thank you Dave for your comment (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,913 Points Dave Walker (8/22/2013 3:17:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem, a great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 23, 2013


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