Ali Sabry

Gold Star - 7,082 Points (11/08/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

I Love You Blind - Poem by Ali Sabry

I love you blind
But I do not know why I love you
I fell in love from the day that knew you when
I do not know where you came from
But I know and I am convinced that our love will stay over the years I'm crazy I love you
My Fair Lady Temptress
O Her black hair long
O Her green eyes wide like the forest
I'll be on my promise and being sure
That the day will come soon and will kneel in front of you carrying a diamond ring asking you to marry me
I will write these poems kept all my life until the last gasp of breath recent
I'll stay write these poems to you
My Fair Lady
And if my long life I could not meet you will redeem myself astray and trapped all my life in the palace
Will be locked into the cell astray in your castle and you are her bodyguard
I love you
I love you
I love you
So I shall throughout the period of my life

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I Rememberd My Lovely Lady Again So I wrote This To Her

Comments about I Love You Blind by Ali Sabry

  • Partha Pratim Goswami Partha Pratim Goswami (8/7/2016 11:57:00 PM)

    Love is divine, and the poet's attempt to express his love is simply Nice.Very interesting poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Val Legend Val Legend (8/5/2016 5:55:00 AM)

    the best way to love is to love blindly for no reason... because when the reason is no longer there... love walks right out of the door (Report) Reply

  • Jeff Taylor Jeff Taylor (6/14/2016 1:07:00 PM)

    And if my long life I could not meet you will redeem myself astray and trapped all my
    life in the palace
    Will be locked into the cell astray in your castle and you are her bodyguard

    What a terrific poem, the lines above were especially poignant to me. (Report) Reply

  • Novoti Gcisakazi Calpurnia Jiya Novoti Gcisakazi Calpurnia Jiya (5/5/2016 3:11:00 AM)

    ncoooo this is so sweet :) :) :) :) i like i like i like :) (Report) Reply

  • Halin Roche (5/1/2016 11:13:00 AM)

    beautiful composition! ! ... (Report) Reply

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (4/21/2016 2:49:00 AM)

    The way, the love was expressed is fantastic. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (4/15/2016 3:46:00 PM)

    I will write these poems kept all my life until the last gasp of breath recent
    I'll stay write these poems to you
    My Fair Lady
    And if my long life I could not meet you will redeem myself astray and trapped all my life in the palace

    love expressions..... love is always a mystery. all its desires, passions, madness, all that is unique to a person who is in love....... wonderful thoughts dear poet. thank u. tony (Report) Reply

  • chirag saxena chirag saxena (4/1/2016 11:14:00 PM)

    your lovely lady is immortal, as your every poetry shows. that (Report) Reply

  • Collins Masika (3/23/2016 8:15:00 AM)

    wow! charming words. (Report) Reply

  • Adeoti Deji (3/22/2016 4:50:00 PM)

    This is a brilliant art, thumb up. (Report) Reply

  • Richard Inya Richard Inya (3/22/2016 2:15:00 PM)

    I see the emotional out-pour. I see passion. The title suggests loving both the wounds, warts and all of the fair lady. I love the tone of the poem. I also think the form of the poem has so much to do with experimentation. (Report) Reply

  • Tapan M. Saren Tapan M. Saren (3/20/2016 4:12:00 AM)

    Full of emotions...... (Report) Reply

  • Robert Katuli (3/14/2016 5:44:00 AM)

    Ali, that's pretty pure love surely! You love someone lots and lots and yet you can't explain why. The beauty of it all is that there's something that attracts you towards that person though you can't point it out easily. Lovely piece. Please, read and comment on my The One Good Thing and other poems. (Report) Reply

  • Alisha Charles Alisha Charles (2/27/2016 9:14:00 AM)

    The only words I can say is, beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Mike Monahan Mike Monahan (12/29/2015 3:23:00 PM)

    Nice one Al! Love makes the world go around? (Report) Reply

  • Michael Walker Michael Walker (9/17/2015 11:28:00 PM)

    You show that love is blind. You obviously care for this 'fair lady' very much. M. Walker. (Report) Reply

  • Alpeshkumar Natubhai Makwana Alpeshkumar Natubhai Makwana (8/22/2015 5:27:00 AM)

    I m sorry but i think you need to first realize what the true heart of English poetry is. you could study some literature for that. your theme is good but there is lack of use of figure of speech. (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (5/6/2015 1:51:00 AM)

    Love for ever the only way to travel for ever...super...regards (Report) Reply

  • Ninette Carey Ninette Carey (4/29/2015 3:49:00 PM)

    Best wishes to you and you fair lady... With Love! (Report) Reply

  • Michael Walker Michael Walker (4/20/2015 7:16:00 PM)

    I liked repetition of 'love', the theme of the poem. His epistrophe 'My Fair Lady' recalls the popular musical, is topical. M. Walker. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, February 19, 2016


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