Colin Ian Jeffery

Rookie - 405 Points (20th May 1942 / Caterham)

Billy - Poem by Colin Ian Jeffery

He never speaks
Trapped within a damaged brain
Body twisted, limbs trembling
Sitting in a hospital yard
Humming tunes without melody.
But in his bright soul he stands tall
Articulate with mind intact
Singing melodious songs of love
Only God and he can hear.


Comments about Billy by Colin Ian Jeffery

  • Rookie - 496 Points Subbaraman N V (5/11/2015 8:50:00 AM)

    Yes.That indeed is the greatness of soul - never dying, ever peaceful soul! A nice poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 961 Points Michael Hagwood (5/6/2015 6:30:00 AM)

    You ask me to comment on your
    work, what you read on you tube and
    and your poem Billy, You are a very
    good writer (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 849 Points Sudipta Bhattacharyya (5/2/2015 1:24:00 PM)

    How touchy this poem is! Hope against hope, that's all.
    Nice poem sir! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 704 Points Lajpat Chawla (4/30/2015 2:22:00 AM)

    Only God and he can hear.
    Well written indeed (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,480 Points Bill Galvin (4/27/2015 11:04:00 AM)

    Thank you, Colin. My love just passed from ALS (Motor Neuron disease) , and with Billy, you capture her bright soul articulate with mind intact, though speechless, as well; and it helped me remember her smile, which she kept to the very end. It can amaze us the way some have to leave this world, but, more amazing is the courage some keep when faced with the end. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,627 Points Raymond Farrell (4/25/2015 10:32:00 AM)

    I think this is a good poem Colin. It clearly expresses something that may indeed be true of many unfortunate souls. I have a son who suffers from mental illness and I can relate to what is being expressed in this poem. Had you not contacted me I would not have taken the time to read your poetry. But I will proceed to do so beginning with this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (3/17/2015 8:55:00 PM)

    Soul remains the same, bright, pure and ever active to purify us.Loved. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,840 Points Lyn Paul (3/17/2015 5:18:00 PM)

    So very moving and So beautifully expressed. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 494 Points Elaine Sept (3/17/2015 12:20:00 PM)

    Short and succinct, and ever so powerful. Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/17/2015 12:02:00 PM)

    Congratulation Colin a deserving poem keep it up thank you (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,852 Points John Richter (3/17/2015 11:34:00 AM)

    Very sad poem. Touching. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,852 Points John Richter (3/17/2015 11:34:00 AM)

    very sad poem...... Touching. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,319 Points Smoky Hoss (3/17/2015 8:41:00 AM)

    A song of the soul, a poem of grand human proportion. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,411 Points Brian Stafford (3/17/2015 5:54:00 AM)

    congrats on writing a excellent poem and getting poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,559 Points Kim Barney (3/17/2015 2:55:00 AM)

    This poem is wonderful and truly deserves being selected as Poem of the Day. Congratulations. Well written. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,283 Points Josey Alfred (2/19/2015 3:03:00 AM)

    Congrats, in a material world who has time to think about a human being, mentally deformed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,903 Points Patricia Grantham (11/22/2014 10:05:00 AM)

    A very touching and heartfelt poem. Billy still manages
    to love life even after overcoming many obstacles. Good. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 758 Points Jitesh Shah (5/5/2014 9:43:00 AM)

    i like this poem and also read my poems sir (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kayleigh Mckenna (11/19/2008 2:50:00 PM)

    i really like this poem so elegant i will keep reading beautifully written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (11/15/2008 6:13:00 AM)

    Singing sweetly a song of love
    Which only he and God can hear.

    Sometimes we catch a line that can mean so much
    This is so refined

    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 17, 2015


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