Jacob Gifford (1995 / plano Illinois)

ur poem is realy realy good it express all what i feel 4 skool, and wt most of us feel , gd written

Your lines are short and written in simple English that isn't monotonous to read...as to your opinion, it's relative: school was like that for me as a junior but in my senior years it was simply awesome...but anyone that's ever has a bad day at school can relate to what you wrote

you've stated clearly your school feeling nicely, but I disagree school on my perspective, protects, feeds you information that you are not forced to eat, basically school is what you make of it,

add this:
school is like hell,
your never safe 'till the bell.

good similies, satisfactory description... i jjust don't agree with all these... school is what you want it to be....

i totally agree
I HATE school! ! ! !
Nice one

good poem and use of similes yes but i can't agree and every thing you said there! ! ! ! !

nice similie work. :)

and I totally agree dude. haha

I totally agree on that one! ! !
School is like HELL! ! ! !
I mean they could at least make school much more fun! ! ! !
Anyway like I said I TOTALLY agree on that one! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Awesome job! ! ! ! !

this poem is really good,

well done (: