I Love You, Goodbye Poem by Catrina Heart
I Love You, Goodbye
Is it I love You, Goodbye...from her side? .......
Is it time to let go a handful of stolen moments?
Is it time to sever free on a tie of illusive affairs?
Is it time to send off without a sound on pavements?
Bid adieu even her heart breaks in an endless cry?
It is not an easy task to tread mountains alone.
It is not an easy move to ascend on a void without destination.
To catch solitary life, at cross roads, is a slash on her wings.
The coast will dry for the languor of the sea to caress her lips;
Tangled isolation, no breeze, no gust of wind will pat the reef.
The world will stop, cascading heaven’s tears.
When it will dry? No one knows, until pain disappears.
This may be the paramount chart; living alone like hermit in an ocean.
Your destiny was sketched by time, framed on far edge of the canal.
She’ll be just a full moon hiding from the clouds.
She’ll be just a star watching you from afar.
For her love will see you through where ever you are….
my dear loveliest angel living in the heart alive.......... proceed with smile smile smile...............
Once there was this girl I liked but I let her go Because of her family, Well it hurts so much Sometimes We must let go of want we love Because it will not work...I think your inspiration come from your life The work shows so much love..My goodness this is a rich substance for poetry My love died a long time ago....I'm so broken up, Its hard loving I guess thats one of the reasons I'm here trying to love again.... I enjoyed this....10+
I am new......... here tread climbing down used for mountain alone either it should be climbing or just wandering in the mountains, hermit in the ocean but hermit solitude on the earth..... in the ocean there is no solitude because the rhythm fails.... unfourtunate every one appreciated thali......... any how fine poem and good piece to read...... life is to smile smile smile............
Deep, well thought out poem dealing sensitively with a very tricky subject, braver than I.10 Catrina well done
First class verse Catrina - - filled with breathtaking imagery - - must be worth far more than 10 - - loved it...... Fay.
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4/26/2024 7:55:18 AM # 1.0.0.1119
emotional lines.... well wriiten congrats and regards sandhya