Hundred Moons Poem by Catrina Heart

Hundred Moons

Rating: 5.0


When darkness came to blanket me
I had a hundred moons tossed upon my palms
Tears cascaded with the torrent wind and gusty trees
Sublime my fingertips, moved to contour
The sleeping galleon upon my feet
Awaken the wraithlike tiger lace
looped somewhere across the road of fears

Over the golden straws piled on the velvet farm
My pages moor to a billion of stars, twinkling on your eyes
The wrinkle on each satin silk tells, journey of your years
Twinkling, giggling, crying, screaming; pleasure of wounds smile
Planets revolve to axis our footprints on the zodiac marks
Guiding our hungry mountains to meet – serendipity
As the fog kisses the hills at dawn to taste
The sweetest dew drops left upon the nation’s lips

The carriage of our horse will sail beyond the frozen lake
Beyond the scorpion and snake desert of the colorful mask
Worn by on our castle
Where we peel off the blooming silhouettes of trees
It is always the season of rain and rainbows, Bluebells and lilies
Trailing the dust of hope and twinkling stars of your hundred moons
On our palms


In dedication to Mr. Satish Verma

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 08 November 2009

What a very... imaginative poem...iip

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Kranthi Pothineni 08 November 2009

Truly poetic. Last verse and the way it had ended is really nice. Specially these lines lines I liked a lot...'As the fog kisses the hills at dawn to taste...The sweetest dew drops left upon the nation’s lips'~Wonderful work.

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Indira Babbellapati 08 November 2009

three cheers to your hundred moons!

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David Harris 08 November 2009

Catrina, a very beautiful poem with wonderful imagery. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Carol Gall 08 November 2009

imagination cheryl yours knows no bounds 10

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Obinna Eruchie 10 November 2009

Beautiful wordplay there, Catrina, you getting better with words.

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Kesav Easwaran 10 November 2009

...'a billion of stars, twinkling on your eyes The wrinkle on each satin silk tells, journey of your years Twinkling, giggling, crying, screaming; pleasure of wounds smile'... well, that's really catchy..good poetry...thanks...10

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Meggie Gultiano 09 November 2009

You made me wander and travel with your magical words. This is sooo beautiful I am stunned! This is the best poetry that I have read today. A real poet..a real talent..Wowwww. Love♥ ♥ ♥ Meggie

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Eyan Desir 08 November 2009

This is pure poetry You should be proud.. You have reached a level many dream to reach.... 10s

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Patti Masterman 08 November 2009

Wow, this thing's a bright beacon, full of magical things, very enjoyable trip.

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