I Love You Mum Poem by Lynette young

I Love You Mum

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I love you mum
We used to have so much fun
I miss you so much
All I want to do is feel your warm touch
From my eye drops another tear
Your voice is what I wanna hear
Not Cath’s or tony’s
Theirs is so phony
I feel so lonely
If I didn’t come here
I wouldn’t have shed a tear
I also miss you bro
Even though you used to hit me to and throw
I feel alone without you
I wish I was still two
Because I’d be with you again
I would not have so much pain
Some people I know are tart’s
But that doesn’t matter because I have a broken heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Victoria Korobochka 09 June 2010

I love poetry that are very intense and yours is definetly one of them. I love what you've written because that's what I write too kk we have something in common kk

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 26 August 2007

That poem is beautifully sad. It has so much emotion to it. Good work.

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