Broken heart emo

I love you soo....

I wait day and night
Trying to seek the light

Im sitting in the dark
Trying my hard to leave a mark

Maybe one day you will know
My heart is saying I Love you so.....

Submitted: Monday, June 29, 2009
Edited: Monday, June 29, 2009

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  • Rookie Emo Boy mike (4/6/2012 11:52:00 PM)

    I love this poem it reminds me of the past where love ment a lot to me: .( (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashwin Alex (6/6/2011 2:53:00 PM)

    simple words for some heavy feelings!
    definitely leaves a mark! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chidiebere Franklin (7/22/2010 6:26:00 AM)

    this is a great poem i mst tell u.small but bigger than an elephant.i can really relate to this huh.kudos and pls mor of this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Iron Panda 23™ (5/17/2010 12:42:00 PM)

    thats sweet! !
    this i likes it! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Emma Adamyan (9/23/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    LOVEly pieace! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Joy Lumanog (7/18/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    waiting in vain for the love...that you wan't to's a really hard to wait for someone..that you dont know if your love worth to love be love back...i know the feeling of it...i remember those days.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ishita Mehta (7/7/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    beautiful poem..................very well composed n ur feelings r so pure........... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Krystal Vincent (7/5/2009 10:28:00 AM)

    i understand this feeling very well. u shouldnt wait for this person to come around because it will only bring heartache an u shouldnt have to wait if he loved u he would already be there and be with u by now.thats my advice. it will hurt to let go but it could be better for u both. after the pain is over u wont feel as miserable anymore ok. lots of love ur friend lol. im only saying this cuz i want u to be happy and enjoy life ok lol. so smile. breath a fresh breath of air and look around u. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (7/5/2009 5:15:00 AM)

    Fine rhyme/rythem.....fine love.......finely penned!
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (6/30/2009 5:15:00 AM)

    love at the unlimited extreme from broken heart is really a good dilemma and what you expressed in this poem is emotional but seem to be omitted for the core of your innocent heart...well done and liked these lines.....
    Maybe one day you will know
    My heart is saying I Love you so..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Susmita tamang (6/29/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    same feeling here.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,001 Points Marieta Maglas (6/29/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    nice poem..well written .10+ (Report) Reply

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