I Love You Still Poem by Jennifer Birchall

I Love You Still

Rating: 4.5


I love you still

I can't help it
I look at those perfect lips I used to kiss
Longing for one more
Your eyes captivating, piercing my soul
Feeling green eyed to my shame
The desire to stroke your beautiful face is strong
I yearn to gently caress your neck
I want to be close to smell you, oh that sweetest smell
I want to lie with you, simply holding hands
I crave your love
I love you

Sunday, November 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,heartbreak,longing,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 18 November 2018

I yearn to gently caress your neck I want to be close to smell you, oh that sweetest smell I want to lay with you, simply holding hands......the longingness of love. romance, desire, yearning of the heart. going to the extent of great fineness. tony

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Thank you Tony for your kind words it means a lot

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Matthew Holloway 18 November 2018

It's good Jen, well written

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Thank you Matthew

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Annette Potgieter 21 November 2018

Your yearning for that one person is well captured.

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Rob Lamberton 28 February 2024

True Love never ends!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2021

I can't help it I look at those perfect lips I used to kiss Longing for one more Your eyes captivating, piercing my soul................wonderful expression!

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Adeeb Alfateh 26 June 2019

I yearn to gently caress your neck I want to be close to smell you, oh that sweetest smell I want to lay with you, simply holding hands I crave your love I love you for the immortal love the mortal soul o in love......... lovely 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 June 2019

Wow! A sweet love poem! My favorite lines: " I want to lay with you, simply holding hands/I crave your love/I love you" . I invite you to read my poem 'The First Love' and provide your precise comments there! For this poem I vote 10/10

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Jane Campion 11 June 2019

There can be no deeper feeling in a poem. Absolutely magnificent. To my favorites.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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