Sun Loungers Poem by Jennifer Birchall

Early morning tea contemplating the day ahead Afternoons sharing dreams and wine Evenings watching the sun disappear Nights watching the dancing flames.....beautiful description from the morning till the night. but it ends sadly. please live in hope dear Jenni... a day will come when u will enjoy evrything again. who knows. God's ways are strange. tony

Jennifer, such a well expressed poem........10+++++++++++++

Nights watching the dancing flames Now lonely and deserted, dreams perished Never to lay together again beautiful wrote beautiful 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

I am reading this poem again for the fourth or fifth time and struck by something new- again. That sense of lounging in the sun, as the title of the poem establishes, instead of being filled with the warmth of the sun- the perturbing irony of it becoming a poem about loneliness. I imagine each time I read this poem anew I will notice something else!

Nights watching the dancing flames/Now lonely and deserted, dreams perished....These two lines are my favorite lines! This is indeed a sweet poem! I predict this fabulous poem will find its readers in due course! Excellent work Jennifer!

Life is full and peaceful until taken away. A poem that shows us the universal equation. I liked the depth in this poem dear Jennifer. Many thanks for your kind words.

Heartfelt story told in eloquent finesse. A beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Thanks for sharing, Jennifer. Remain enriched.