I Must Of Deserved It Poem by Jennifer Birchall
I Must Of Deserved It
Did I do something to deserve all of this?
My eyes are no longer the shining diamonds glistening captivated you
They are angry crimson they hold much sorrow
My skin is not perfectly soft and bright as an autumn dawn sky
It's the leaves that have fallen hard and withering
My lips are not the perfect red like rose petals
They now rarely but smile
My mouth once kissed so delicately
Now hold words spouting poisoned venom
My body was held so tightly and caressed so gently
Is now scarred and damaged
My heart was bursting with enough love for a universe
Now it's a black hole a void
A beautiful flower without water wilted and died
Yes I deserved it
Well thought-out and nicely brought forth from the heart. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Jennifer.
Beautifully crafted. From asking to confirmation. Clever.Thank you so much dear Jennifer.
a " break up" can be a " headache" as well, but perhaps you meant " heartache" ? ? i get the picture. :) bri
Yes it is heartache thank you for pointing this out to me, and yes it definitely causes many headaches too.
My heart was bursting with enough love for a universe/Now it's a black hole a void/A beautiful flower without water wilted and died.....I greatly admire the intensity of poetic expression! A beautiful poem my friend....10
A very touching poem. A vivid depiction of sorrow and pain caused by break up. A well crafted write with superb imagery. May you find solace in Poetry, Jennifer.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A truly brilliant write, great flow and use of emotion and imagery
Thanks Matthew for your kind words.