My eyes start walking on tiptoe
To follow wherever you go
My ears start stealing your every word
To listen to the words I haven't heard
My heart starts beating like drums
When you come closer like chums
My brain start dreaming sweeter dream
When I think of you as ice-cream
My body starts warming up like midday
When you touch me when you want me to stay
I love you this holy words I want to say
When you make out what's inside me like X-ray
the first two lines are my favourite lines. I love this poem. thanks for sharing
so cute and wonderful beautiful similes and metaphors great :)
wow what a wonderful poem, , , i love your dictions your rhyms your methaphoric descriptions, , keep it up
passionate intimacy. love the lines. keep up the gud work
What a perfect write, what perfectly choice of words, I liked it keep good work up!
Asif, you change! ! ! ! ! Good and romantic! ! ! ! Love the sounds of drums! ! ! ! ! They always enunciated something good
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
such good work and nice flow