I loved the entire hive
but i could buy honey from shops
you thought i prefered the latter
I needed the beautiful bunch of flowers to fill my nose but i could buy fragrance
in that cosmetic store
I loved the springs and the fountains
the streams below the mountains
but i could buy water in the bottle
I needed the mangos, the grapes, the oranges the whole forest
but i could get them in the supermarkets and groceries
I needed the entire heartdom
the romance, the passion, the complement
but you still thought i loved limbs-apartdom!
The unfulfilling enjoyment, the lust
the fornication
now you made limps part many days
and my money part one day!
you flew away
i didnt like the latter
Really nice idea in composing your story...I appreciate the steps you mentioned.and examples Great! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
good poetic flow...i liked it a lot