I'M Going To Be Someone Poem by Arianne Owens

I'M Going To Be Someone

Rating: 3.5


Dreams like this make you memorize the stars at night,
cause you know your name will be just as bright.
You know you belong in the city of lights.
They say to give up, you know you got to fight.
People say think practicle, this is the only thing that feels right.
This dream will one day go on and take flight.
Dreams like this make you memorize the stars at night,
cause you know your name will be just as bright.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 21 June 2012

You know you belong in the city of lights. They say to give up, you know you got to fight. thats true........finite! !

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Tolulope Modupe 20 June 2012

Its an understatement that this is a good poem..its full of emotions and hope. I like it..thumbs up to u!

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Yes, very deep, and proud, wonderful write there The_African_Son

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Tiana Webb 19 June 2012

This poem has touched me like no other poem has. It is so full of emotion, I can feel them for myself. I also love how you have used the first words also as your last, as if you are showing that you believe them yourself. So beautifully written. Keep writing [3 Tiana xx

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Locura Alaam 18 June 2012

Very nicely written! I like how you used the first two lines to conclude as well, keep writing

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