I'M Lost In Your Sea Of Beauty Poem by kendall cook

I'M Lost In Your Sea Of Beauty

Rating: 5.0


Falling fast and gaining speed
I don't know what is happening
It's never been like this before
I must be in a dream
It's never felt like this before
I hope i never wake
It seems so perfect right here right now
I see the light in her eyes
As beautiful as a sunrise
A thousand colors intertwined
Falling fast and gaining speed
I'm lost in her sea of beauty

Friday, August 1, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Craig Anderson 01 August 2008

That could be a perfect description of your first parachute jump or poem. Whatever, it was a really nice piece. Regards, Craig.

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silver phoenix 01 August 2008

this is really beautiful.10/10! no better way to describe it If you have time please read some of my work too and rate it and/or comment it. Constructive criticism is welcome as well, offcourse. Thankyou and keep it up, Kilian

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