shilpa Poetess

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I'M Sorry - Poem by shilpa Poetess

I'm sorry for everything you've been through
It must've been very hard on you
I'm sorry for all that's been said and done
I was the moon, you were the sun
I'm sorry for not making everything right
But the situation I was in, was very tight
I'm sorry for not lending you a hand
If only I could be a better friend
I'm sorry if it seemed like I didn't care
Lucky for you, your special- someone was there
I'm sorry for breaking your heart
For forgiveness, where do I start?


Comments about I'M Sorry by shilpa Poetess

  • Rookie - 0 Points The Jesus Of Suburbia Is A Lie (12/24/2009 3:49:00 AM)

    So sweet...!
    A good way for Asking for forgiveness.... :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (6/29/2009 4:20:00 AM)

    Lucky for you, your special- someone was there
    I'm sorry for breaking your heart
    For forgiveness, where do I start?
    very good verses... meaningful enough, rich idea you expresse in this poem.. love, hate, forgiveness, sentiments, emotions, feelings go side by side with professional way... really a sweet poem and hope you never stop writing..10++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/15/2009 11:36:00 AM)

    Nice and touching 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009



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