I'M Trying. Poem by Kyle Bickham

I'M Trying.

Rating: 4.5


You are the cause,
Of this un-controlling rage,
Of this un-controlling pain,
Of this un-controlling sadness,

You always make me feel ashamed,
And always put me to blame,
For your mistakes,
You deceiving snake,

You make me hurt myself,
And wish I wasn't living,
But I've got to stay strong,
The question is,
For how long?

Friday, May 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smile :) 18 June 2014

GREAT POEM, i loved every part of it and especially the question in the end, very catchy. you got talent there so, keep writing and never give up. -smile -

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Colleen Courtney 29 May 2014

For however long it takes! Nobody should be made to feel worthless by another. We all have value and worth. Find it and be true to you! Nice job on this poem. Can feel your anger and frustration. Glad to see it put on paper. Poetry can be a wonderful venting outlet!

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