I Miss You Poem by Manonton Dalan

I Miss You



darkness wins again
not a whisper came
offered a sweet dream
but i’m consume reminiscing

i painted blue lagoon
have stories of their own
i came closer
impressed by lovely character

smile touch my lips
but my heart weeps
and i'm missing you indeed
even on my empty bed

do you have
something like this
which brings you
almost to tears

... thanks for reading my newly born
pup. have a nice day. be good
to yourself now. do you hear? md

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ena N. Mori 02 March 2016

Going back to 08 poems now... i enjoyed reading this one.

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Steffi Webster 28 November 2008

A thoughtful poem with underlying passion... I like it x

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Ency Bearis 22 September 2008

a vivid write to dig on... Ency Bearis

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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