(virginia, usa)

What do you think this poem is about?

... i could laugh

i know-
you won’t join me
beneath the moon
to taste ferments
from crystalline glass
nesting on satin

though you
have that longing
wedge within-
embering to a glow
warming winter cold
to degree of comfortability
yet doubts drape
with gentle feathery clouds passing,
sprouting buds concealed
too young to foresee
blooms on mistletoe

but i’m most hopeful... enough
that i could... i could laugh

Submitted: Tuesday, November 18, 2008


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  • Matthew Foor (1/24/2013 11:01:00 AM)

    I really enjoy your writing. Thanks for sharing.

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  • Matthew Foor (1/24/2013 11:00:00 AM)

    Im loving the pieces that I have read and ranked so far. Another young poet takes the stage.

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  • Gerard Rochford (6/23/2012 1:58:00 AM)

    you have a wayward gift. who are you?

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  • Adeline Foster (4/17/2012 5:19:00 PM)

    Love it! Liked that doubts drape. Read mine - Frost Flowers -
    Adeline

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  • JOSEPH POEWHIT (11/18/2008 2:35:00 PM)

    Nice to have a good feeling attitude

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