I Miss You Poem by sarah khalid

I Miss You

Rating: 5.0


In the night when I walk alone
I think of u n close my eyes
I wish u were here beside me
Holding me, wrapping me
Then for while I opened my eyes
I saw u standing there, chill ran down my spine
Hey? Ur the one I was thinking about
No reply
Was that a piece of my thought that remained in my eyes or were u trying to c how much I needed u...
I smiled, huh...So u won’t say a word?
can I hug u n wrap u?
No reply
I moved a step closer. My heart beating faster than anything in the world..
Felt I was melting n at the same time freezing. Drastic change in my body temperature high, highest to low lowest...
Felt that strange feelin, the unbearable happiness. Some what a bitter sweet sadness kind of feeling engulfed me…
Was scared that if I moved one more step closer she would disappear..
Standing still, the cold breeze kissing my cheeks…blustery weather
My hands in my pocket, shivering…
I was there beside her, in a wink of an eye..
That was the very moment I was holding…for once she was there when I needed her the most..
I took my hand out of the pocket n tried to stroke her on her cheeks..
That was when I was traumatized, lost, down, shattered..
She disappeared. With a sudden gust of air. And all that was left behind was er smell in the air…and the cool breeze.
Walking down the alley.holding my hands. Hugging myself..
This pain is unbearable I thought..
And filled my heart with the piercing pain I was running away from..
I sat under a tree. Cried miserably..
I miss you.
I miss you smile..
I miss the time we were together..
I miss you. I miss you..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 27 November 2009

I felt it was a true story don't worry you get better in time

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scent azzaro 24 November 2009

please comment..and let me know how to make it better..

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