I Miss You Poem by Adilson Pinto

I Miss You

Rating: 4.8


This is
The best day:
Sunny, happy,
And you
- so far away!

This is
The best holiday
No pain,
No sadness:
These things already
Went away!

Children
Always
Like to play
On the white sand:
They are so gay!

Lovely lovers
They love to say
I love you!
Devotees
In the beach?
They come
to pray!

Sunset!
So beautiful!
All the people
Went away...
Truly
It was the best day:
Sunny, happy,
But you
Oh! My dearest
So far away!

I Miss You
Monday, July 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: missing you
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My love, how I miss you baby....Jing from Philippines!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 04 September 2017

All is well but his thirsty eyes look for someone who is the dearest, without that loved one the joy is a colorful flower without an aroma. What a lovely poem!

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 July 2017

Lovely write. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Unwritten Soul 02 July 2017

Oooo that so sweet poem for your loved one...maybe you miss Jing but Missing someone makes life interesting when we get them back to us even a word of hello :) ..So enjoy till the moment come :)

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Akram Saqib 01 July 2017

Oh! My dearest So far away! excellent expression,

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Adilson Pinto 02 July 2017

Thank you very much my friend! Success in your literary work!

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