I Miss You Poem by Lynn Grassette

I Miss You

Rating: 5.0


i miss you
though it's only been seven hours,
if only to feel that substance again;
that intoxicates me,
and fills me up,
till i spill over my edges
and find myself naked,
in your arms

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anabel just Anabel 02 March 2007

wow pretty good! ! ! you are great! ! it somehow really describe how it feels! ! !

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*Mandy * 11 February 2007

I know just how you feel! I hate being away from my BF. It drives me crazy! Wonderful Poem! ♥ Mandy

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Jerry Hughes 10 February 2007

...sensual and sad, love it

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Original Unknown Girl 01 February 2007

Wowser.... love this one Linley, know this feeling only too well.... fantastic! HG: -) xx

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jim hogg 31 January 2007

Real longing in this, and fresh, quality writing.

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