hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 39,224 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Need Not Be Apologetic - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I need not be apologetic
As life turned out to be tragic
Nothing went as per wish
I was simply finished

Luck too played great part
But I will have to depart
From the scene of selfish world
As I felt motionless and cold

I was known as sticky person
May offer arguments without any reason
Invite wrath and unnecessary quarrel
Fortune was not to swing well

Well, married to a nice lady
Had children to feel lucky
Nothing short in daily routine
Everything was perfectly fine

I feel no good
As I have been quietly misunderstood
Nowhere have I found favor
Least to talk about honor

I would have loved to follow
Any one that my conscious allowed
But I found everyone compromising
I found all the essences missing

I could not stand among
As every time they proved me wrong
I was mot to be taken in consideration
This was leading to some king of frustration

When I go back to analyze?
I can not happily summarize
I did try to make other happy and oblige
But, in fact, they all had no time to realize


Comments about I Need Not Be Apologetic by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 39,224 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/6/2013 7:10:00 PM)

    Kaylanna George
    This is so moving and thought provoking...you had me crying sir...you really did wow....sigh....recommending. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,224 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/6/2013 7:10:00 PM)

    Some Girl
    Many themes run through this - a good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,224 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/6/2013 7:07:00 PM)

    Re: I need not be apologetic (Score: 1)
    by Rabbitt on Tuesday, August 06,2013 (12: 18: 35)
    This poem gets my attention. Maybe it's because I could have written it from my own experience. The poem describes the life of a 4.4 is one of 9 personality types of a typing system called the enneagram. I have a more positive outlook today. All my experiences, good and bad, are part of who I am today. And I think I am OK today. Be well and happy. Bob

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    Re: I need not be apologetic (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Tuesday, August 06,2013 (20: 06: 15)
    to be always positive is good sign and life can be spent easily too..This is one kind of feeling human develops at some sage.... reagards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,224 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/5/2013 10:09:00 PM)

    honesty


    Lisa FraleyLess than a minute ago
    i can relate to some of this poem keep writing! ! ! !
    Comment +1
    excellent (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,224 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/5/2013 10:08:00 PM)

    Jordan Dumer3 minutes ago
    I liked it.
    Comment +1
    Good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,224 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/5/2013 10:08:00 PM)

    Shaun Krohn4 minutes ago
    Good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,224 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/5/2013 10:05:00 PM)

    I need not be apologetic
    As life turned out to be tragic (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 5, 2013


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