'I Never See What Has Been Done, I Only See What Remains To Be Done' Poem by Josh Ross

'I Never See What Has Been Done, I Only See What Remains To Be Done'

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Time rushes us,
It deprives us from taking our time and letting things be,
We always feel like there's never enough time,
Always doing things simultaneously,
It's harder to understand things that way,
But we get past that and see the bigger picture,
So is time bad?
Time is neither good nor bad,
Anyone can see the worst in anything,
But when you can find the good in it,
It illuminates your world,
Leaving nothing but bliss.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
People are so much in a rush that they fail to see the big picture. So for everyone being a slave to their schedule.. appreciate the significant moments.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karoliena Somura 30 November 2012

I love your word choices in this poem like illuminates, bliss, simultaniously, all sends a great messege. Awesome job!

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Yokosuka, Japan
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