Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Pledge


I pledge allegiance to national flag
Let there be any attempt to tarnish the image or drag
It shall remain super most in my mind
I am not novice so not to understand and go blind

How many people have shed their blood for motherland?
How many might have perished in foreign land
For upholding the national pride and honor
What might have they expected in return for?

I am for sure many might have perished unsung?
No national anthem might have been aired or sung
Yet we owe our head in their honor for brave front
This is what all citizens expect from soldiers or want

Today we are free country with all liberal thoughts
On national front we have undergone sufferings when fought
No one wanted any material benefit but only free air
Have we given them what they wanted as fair share?

Motherland is compared to a beautiful and sacred lady
Love and respect shown for all the time from everybody
No one can think of harming national interest?
It is expected and desired even more as best

We have forgotten our past
We have lost the trust
Our head bows down in shame
Where to go and whom to blame?

The beautiful lady, motherland we call, is torn apart
She has been taken off cloths and divided in parts
Who can claim they have national interest at heart?
Can any one think of making again a noble start?

No, nothing will be done
Past golden days are for memory to remain
Flowers will laid as mark of respect once in year
Everybody is afraid and gripped of fear

We are killing our own brethrens
Poor are dying everyday without much concern
This is welfare state we enshrined?
Was that the show for later on to be fined?

We have created position to corner the wealth
Compromised with nature and helped to deteriorate health
It is world boxing match to attract more people
To pay for the show and invite more trouble

Submitted: Tuesday, May 31, 2011
Edited: Wednesday, June 01, 2011

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2011 7:43:00 AM)

    We are killing our own brethrens
    Poor are dying everyday without much concern
    This is welfare state we enshrined?
    Was that the show for later on to be fined?

    We have created position to corner the wealth
    Compromised with nature and helped to deteriorate health
    It is world boxing match to attract more people
    To pay for the show and invite more trouble
    ...its a nice poem with sadness and spirit of sympathy (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2011 8:54:00 PM)

    Re: I pledge (Score: 1) by Ilan on Wednesday, June 01,2011 (09: 20: 19) Beautiful Powerful Majestic Like your country Great India Kind rgs Ilan (Report) Reply

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