I sat down to write a comment line
Over two cups of good red wine
Listening to the midnight rain-
In one poem 'Rain' I mean
Missing out there the inside 'n'
By the wine high me in
Came out blinking off my pen
A 'lie' that didn't rain!
PS: (added since)
The letter ‘n' on my keyboard is playing havoc. Typing often fails. I wanted to add a comment ''a good line'' over a poem read. What came out was ''a good lie''. My poet friend got wild and fired me off his list!
This funny experience tempted me to come out with this write. Thanks
May 6th 2009
'This N… The Zen Helps you to contemplate And encapsulate Your pen P ~ O ~ E ~ M*.' ~ niv Ms. Nivedita UK --- * For each alphabet two and half into four is equal to Ten
I love this, though it may cause me to experiment with alphabetical excursions..(smile)
Friends are shapes Flow around the space Friends are angles Sharing common symmetrical patterns Sometimes like Numbers Even or odd – you’ll remember In simple or complex life’s equation TRUE Friends share honest opinion Hence.......Even without N It won't change the condition Thanks!
Very amusig, thaks to the electroic revolutio ad the side effects that come with it.. do you fiNd aNything missiNg in the first few words of my commeNt :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice poeam. gr8t story buddy.10/10 hope u'll write more, thnx sana