I Saw, I Heard Poem by Danzen D...

I Saw, I Heard



I saw her smile,
sweet,
dizzying drug
it was.

'Hello' she whispered
quietly,
I said 'Hi'
grinning.

She beamed and said
something,
too many words
too fast.

Started to walk
her..
'Noooo' silently
screamed..

Said bye, I too
paced.
And then on flat
pavement..

Tripped, a minute
today.
She giggled,
I heard.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nashy Lamen 15 September 2009

Weird poems... hahaha.. Same question who is the girl? ? ... :)

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Madelene Calalo 12 September 2009

haha... soooo.. who's the girl? ? .. haha.... just kiddin'.... ^_^...

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Julia Pascual 12 September 2009

hmmm... who's this girl? ? =) nicely done... keep it up! !

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Lorena Cruz 12 September 2009

nicely written my friend.. keep on rocking

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