I could not bear
The thought of you
Not being there
So I searched for you
Everywhere
I walked the streets
Searching for you
Asking people along the way
If they had seen you
But no one seemed to know
Where you had gone
I left the city
In search of you
I walked miles and miles
Through rugged terrains
Asking and seeking
But I could not find you
Now I am old and weary
I can no longer search for you
I can only your picture carry
In my wallet
So that I can always remember you
The way you were
When you left
My God.. i feel the same way.. u r amazing dear friend truly! 10 for an outstanding piece =)
You have given yourself away in words very successfully. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra
A sad one. The feelings and the agony quite visible in this writing that it hurts, . Hope it's only a poem. Quite an extreme from Cinderella the master piece on Love.
Wonderful write Sandra...your use of images is beautiful....Fi 10+++
Our search never ends........every one is searching for someone or something..........perhaps our search will end when we will find the Lord..........As Jesus said, 'Find the kingdom of God and all other things will be added unto you...........Good Write'..............
I find it rejuvenating....for it never lost hope to fine...someone who truely love...a special search that grows...beyond space and time a very inspiring poem of love and affection thank you..God bless
MADAM, , The pathos of loss and failure to regain is depicted in a nice way. I like it. One of my brothers wife got lost in an expedition to Everest, The boy searched and searched, couldn'i find and ultimately settled in New Zealand. you deserve A 10 from me. -Rajkumar
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem Sandra, yet so poignant.