I was praying, I was crying when I was praying
I closed my eyes
I didn’t let my tears fall
I was breathing but I couldn’t talk
Cause tonight you broke my heart
Inside of me, Sunset
With no sunrise
The ray of light
That you turned off
You promised me to go
But tonight you said no
I was praying, I was crying when I was praying
Then
I said nothing
My head was down
Tears were slipping on my cheek
I was forgetting to forgive you
But I forgave
I forgave you to get out of the darkness
And
To be born again
very captivating.. its really deep and sad, with that glimmer of hope at the end, great job on this one
So catching a poem is.We can feel you cry with you, and even forgive him!
rebirth after forgiveness, thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing
Very good! Writing our feelings is very difficult. you did a fine job, i gave you the 10 you deserved. please read my SECOND CHANCE
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I would like to translate this poem
A very touching page of sorrow, tender lines of weeping words Lovely piece