I Wanna Live Without My Heart. Poem by Arfa Iris

I Wanna Live Without My Heart.

Rating: 5.0


I wish to live without my heart,

i wish to tear it apart.

i just cant bear it anymore.

its palpitations i can't ignore.

i'm afraid the way it throb,

one day, my body it will probe.

it makes me pant & breathless,

at times makes me pant & helpless.

though i love everything given by fate,

my only heart, is all i hate.

i wish, i could tear it apart.

i wanna live without my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rishi Menon 14 May 2011

You have vividly captured the emotion, anguish and suffering felt by someone that is in deep sorrow. It is true that some people can feel great pain as opposed to others. To be perceptive at that level in itself is a gift and at times - a curse. A 10 from me.

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J'sN Young 10 April 2011

again I love your style and how you think

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 April 2011

Arfa your poem has taken my heart out of me. The way you have described your sentiments is really great and can wring any heart. Great pathos. Thanks for sharing.....

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Arfa Iris

Arfa Iris

hyderabad, A.P, India.
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