**** I Want ***** Poem by Tara Chettur

**** I Want *****

Rating: 3.2


I want to be in the wronged side
I want to be erroneous always
I want to break the rules…
I want to make my own way
I want to be immature…
I want to talk childish….
To be true to myself was hurting,
I want to mask myself!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mayur Soni 23 December 2008

good so what mask u need, and why to hide reality but its fact everyone looking for masks

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Sameer Ahmed 23 December 2008

Illustration of this natural behaviour upon frustration in very compact lines.....best wishes

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Raj Arumugam 23 December 2008

terse and sharp lines on the masks one wears

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Anjali Sinha 27 December 2008

you want to be just on the opposite side may I ask WHY? . Whatever a nice one-- regards anjali

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 03 January 2009

A revolutionery will think like that. a good structured poem drawing attention

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 April 2011

i want to be with you. marks 10

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Mayur Soni 12 December 2009

Everyone wanna be on wrong side but very few dare, nice and natural human tendency, great work.

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Subroto Chatterjee 09 August 2009

In your dreams Tara...................in your dreams! ! There, you can ask for ANYTHING.... May your dreams come true..... Cheers. Subroto

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Ted M 09 July 2009

Your writings are quite interesting. At times you feel good to challenge yourself.

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Kesav Easwaran 09 July 2009

you speak true as per your mind...everyone does all those things you list out there...and wears a negating mask... good write...insightful...thanks...Tara...10

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