My house, is burning under fire?
I’m gathering proof!
To accuse my neighbor
I scuffle I ruffle I shuffle the things!
Still I can’t get hold of my anger!
If someone could tell me
What should I do with my anger?
Those who saved the lives
The real heroes
Would they come back?
To tell the tale…
To tell what should we do?
To gather the proof or retaliate?
What should I do with my anger?
My house, my nation is burning under fire!
Ok, aside from the semantics and spelling problems, you can take your anger....very powerful emotion....and channelise it into something constructive. There are many people like you with similar sentiments, resulting from the aftermath of numerous murderous tragedies/attacks. For starters, you've already written this poem, haven't you? Thanks for sharing. Cheers. Subroto
My house, is it burning under fire? I am gathering proof! To accuse my neighbour i scuffle, i ruffle and i shuffle the things! Still I can’t get hold of my anger! If someone could tell me What i should do with my anger? Those who saved the lives, The real heores, Would they come back To tell the tale…? To tell what we should do To gather the proof or retaliate! What should I do with my anger? My house, my nation, is burning under fire! I have reset your poems after language correctio and puncuation, to give perfection. Only in question form the auxiliary verb will come befor the subject. When it becomes a clause, the auxiliary verb will come after the subject like in a sentance form. for eg: What should I do? I dont know what I should do. Poem is alright.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
its good that ur pen moves for reasons also, and u care for society