I Want To Scream Poem by Andrew BensleyPage

I Want To Scream



Anger,
again i want to scream,
but for different reasons.
i cant even explain how i feel...

i just wanna rip my face off, freak some people out...

but i cant get out how i feel, cause then i get screamed at and told i'm an ignorant adolescent that doesn't understand the way 'things' work.

i feel a red scene in my mind, not so much red, more like a reddish-orangish feeling, like that which makes me want to curl in a ball and fade away, but only because my inability to be able to scream.

Their watching me like an eagle soars over its prey, eyes locked onto its food.

i cant even budge a movement,
for if i even attempt to budge i'm seen and stalked forever..

i want,


to scream...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Herrera 11 March 2010

I didn't like this one too much. There were way too many cliches for me.3/10

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Aimee Lee 09 March 2010

gahh, dont we all...>_<

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red rose of texas 11 March 2010

haha i know what you mean lol i feel the same way love is always red rose of texas

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Think of the hard times as satan tempting you. and in fact that is what is happening... ik its hard to think like that sometimes especially when you want to scream. just think of the future and when you live on your own ik its a long way away but its has helped me through.

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Adeline Foster 13 October 2015

Hope you got your wish and hope it did you some good. Read mine - Who Am I - Adeline

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Adam Reed 13 March 2010

it seemed to me like you had a lot going through your mind that you tried to get out all at once when u wrote this. take it one concept at a time and you'll go far :)

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Carrie Salazar 13 March 2010

i really like this one. i especally like the detail.: D

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i like the way you explained this. it's wonderful in it's own twisted way. haha. people like us make a spiral staricase look straight. i luv it.

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Kassiah Gervaise 12 March 2010

brilliant, i understand this poem i see eye to eye with it's words, wonderful.

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