Thinking Of You Poem by Andrew BensleyPage

Thinking Of You

Rating: 5.0


tell her, tell her i love her,
tell her i wanna be there standing above her.

making sure she's alright, cause i love her so much,
making sure she' still bright, feeling perfect to the touch.

she's the only girl i ever wanna be with,
and the only girl i wanna be seen with.

i thank God every day for a girl like her,
looks perfect before bed, during and after.

i don't care about all the makeup she wears,
don't care about how she does her hair.

all i want to see is her beautiful eyes,
light green and hazel, with a hint of yellow on the side.

when i see her smile, it makes it hard to breath,
the breath leaves me because she's smiling at me.

i don't know why though because mine eyes are unhealthy,
but i might pass out now because that perfect girl loves me.

it's been a rocky road, a very bumpy ride,
but you've been right here right by my side.

it's been almost a hell-excuse for a life,
but if to see you once, i had to go through the pain and bad signs,
i'd go through it all a hundred million and two more times.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well, if that isn't spoken from the heart, I don't know what is. Very strong feelings burst forth off the page and onto the eyes of those reading it. Nice work. I know the feeling.

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Aimee Lee 09 March 2010

wow, thats beautiful. lucky girl ^_~

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Lost Salley 30 August 2009

i love all the poems you wrote...they are really good

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