i will go far,
i will be a star,
i will succeed,
i will not smoke weed,
i will not do drugs,
i will not hang with thugs,
i will get a education,
i will survive this hatin' nation,
i will go far,
i will be a star,
i will not drink and drive,
i will stay alive,
i will lead but not follow,
i will see tomorrow,
i will worck as a team,
i will follow my dream,
i will achieve,
i will because i do believe,
i will make this world a better place,
i will put a smile on my face,
i will do what i can,
i will become a better man,
i will go far,
i will be a star......
01/21/2009
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
Nothing but positive feelings conveyed to the reader. Very uplifting.
I will congratulate you and give you a 10! good piece for its message..
i will- what a great piece of art! i loved how you in such a short poem taught me who you are and where your standards lie. your determination shows me you will go far. good luck keep writting!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I will have to say you did awesome on this poem.. I love the flow and the ring to it.. great piece Jose Krista